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@@ -45,9 +45,7 @@ Surprised by the eyedrakes' sudden appearance and the _disappearance_ of Faerû
 
 As off a spring, Louisa acts. She knows exactly what spell the situation demands, a spell only she can cast in this moment. Chesira's glances round in wild dismay as her barrier falls catch Lousia's glare of determination; the sounds of the party clashing with the remaining eyedrake fall away, and for a moment the two lock eyes in their own yet-smaller pocket of reality before, at a word from the llama's mouth, the hag is gone with a pop!
 
-The main threat dealth with[^banish]--- for now, at least--- Louisa turns her attention to the final, nearly fallen eyedrake as it winds up for another bout of anti-magic breath. The wave of numbing force never comes; the wizard's fireball puts an end to all that.
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+The main threat dealth with[^banish]--- for now, at least--- Louisa turns her attention to the final, nearly fallen eyedrake as it winds up for another bout of anti-magic breath, but the cone of numbing force never comes; the wizard _spits_ a fireball that puts an end to all of that, the eyedrake crashing dryly to the ground, body singed and shrunken like a burnt piece of toast^[toast].
 
 [^neverwinter]: [Neverwinter](https://forgottenrealms.fandom.com/wiki/Neverwinter) is a northern city of craftsmen and artisans regarded as among the most cosmopolitan metropoleis in Faerûn.
 
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 [^eyedrake]: An [eyedrake](https://forgottenrealms.fandom.com/wiki/Eyedrake) is a lesser beholderkin that comes about when beholders dream of a dragon.
 
-[^banish]: Lousisa casts bannishment, sending the night hag directly to hell.
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+[^banish]: Lousisa casts bannishment, sending the night hag directly to hell.
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+[^toast]: Faithful to the scene as it happened.
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